tip1:write the dialogue that is suitable for the character/personality
tip2:write only necessary info to tell your story.KEEP IT SIMPLE>SHORT SENTENCES
tip3:Listen to the dialogues on good tv shows & listen to how people talk in real life
CLASS/GROUP EXERCISE:WRITING DIALOGUES
Topic:DOMINO
Key Character: saengyo(woman in white shirt)
Souen(girl in yellow shirt)
Bystander : Bystander
STORY
They fight over pizza
Scene1
*gets out of the car*
Saengyo: OI Souen!
Souen: what?!
Saengyo: I need a word with you?
Souen : *Sigh*
Saengyo: Did you eat it?
Souen: Huh?
Saengyo: I can smell the pizza coming out from your breath.
Souen: What? It wasn't me. My pet octopus ate it.
Saengyo: Dont lie to me. You don't have a octopus. Blah..blahblahblah. Etc.
Soeun: C'mon, you know i worked at the aquarium.
Saengyo: Don't you freaking lie to me.
*Saengyo grabs Souen's arm*
Souen: You little bastard!
Bystander 1: Oh my they're gonna kill each other! I bet $5 on the yellow shirt.
Bystander 2: I bet $10 on the white one.
Bystander 1: Oh my god! Who's gonna win?
*fight commence*
*Saengyo snatched Soeun's bag*
Saengyo: THIS IS FOR PIZZA HUT!
Souen's child: *gasp*
Saengyo's child: Ma!
*fight breaks off*
Saengyo: Ugh…
*Saengyo drives off*
Saengyo: C'mon honey, we're going to pizza hut for dinner.
Saengyo's child: Yaaayyyyyyyyyy!!!!
Done by: Barnabas, Khairizal, Martin.
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